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Can you send me the advanced form Karty? Pwease???

Okie, here goes nothing:

Character's Name~ Vaporstar

Character's Age~ 18 moons

Gender~ Female

Alliance~ Riverclan

Rank(CANNOT BE HIGH POSITION WITHOUT ADMIN PERMISSION)~ Leader

Appearance(At least 6 sentences)~ 1.She is white with blue patches, and blue feet. 2.She has a small scar on her front right paw from an accident as a kit. 3.Her eyes are sea green, but the left one is tinted more blue. 4.She has a blue patch on the tip of her tail, her locket, back and one on her top left flank. 5.She has regualr cat ears, not folded or scarred yet. 6.Her fur is short.

Personality(At least 7 sentences)~(The groups below do not count for the 7 sentences) 1.She loves to go hunting as well as swimming. 2.Her favorite food is the salmon that swim up the River in the summer. 3.She is kind and caring but she can be very vicious to those who trespass on territory. 4.She is loyal to her clan and has never had a very strong relationship with another cat from anyother Clan other than her own. 5.When she speaks at the Gathering she can be shy depending on the topic, she hates to look weak. 6.She can be very flirty and is a helpless romantic, looking for a mate. 7.She loves her Clan and would give her life (or lives) up for it.

~Likes(at least 3)~ 1.Salmon 2.Kits 3.Cute toms

~Dislikes(at least 4)~ 1.Mud in/on her nose 2.Cats tresspassing on territory 3. She really hates seeig cats from other clans steal prey from her Clan territory. 4. She hates when she gets trespasser fur stuck in her claws, clogging them.

~Strengths(No more than 4)~ 1. Water fighting 2.Public speaking 3.Being responsible 4.Controling her temper
(Basically stuff she's good at?)

~Weaknesses(at least 3)~ 1.The sight of a hurt kit 2. One of her Clanmates being tortured 3.The sound of metal scratching metal. (What she goes weak from?)

History(at least 8 sentences)~ 1.She has lived in Riverclan all her life, when her father (Rainstorm) dies she gets cold and rarely ever happy. 2.One night her father showed up in her dreams, from Starclan and he tells her to stop acting cold or no one would love her. 3.After a few days of getting a better attitude, she goes back to the way she used to be. 4. A few moons later her mother (Iceclaws) becomes an Elder. 5.When hunting her crush (Hailshower) dies by falling off of a rock and into the River, he breaks his neck on a rock. 6. She becomes depressed for a moon and gets another message from her parents, "Do I have to come back again? Is this going to be a daily thing?" He father meows annoyedly and Vaporstar gets better once again. 7. Her sister (Dewdrop) becomes a medicine cat apprentice at 8 moons; and a full medicine cat at 15 moons of age. 8. She gets the news that her leader (Frozenstar) dies and she steps up and offers to become leader.

(How's that Karty?)

YEEEEEAAAA! Thank you sooooo soooo sooo much Karty!!! *Air hug*